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Position:Home>Poetry> Am i good poem wrighter?Question: Am i good poem wrighter!? I have decided maybe to start writing poems!.!.take a look and voice ur opinion, i take all criticism as positive except if u just say no u suck, i need a reason:
-"I nearly melted in his giant brown shinning eyes" -"His mind was cluttered, therefor he couldn't see straight" -"The light was glistening on the dawn of the night" -"The trees swayed in the wind to the storm" Please Say what you think Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Good!. I think if you like to write then you'll be a good writer!. It comes from the heart not from the mind!. I suggest going to www!. wrighters-network!.com It's great sight where you can make an account and post your poems and let people critique them or give you suggestions for them!. good luck!.Www@QuestionHome@Com you write well but just need to keep on experimenting with different vocabulary different styles of writing and take inspiration from other poets i like your little poem its very well writen but if i was you i would of done it like this I nearly melted in his giant shining eyes his mind was cluttered,therefor he declined the light was glistening upon the dawn of night and the trees all swayed in the storm of sight!. you really should keep on writing its a learning process and you already have obvious potenial but overall i think your very good well done x!.x!.xWww@QuestionHome@Com Not bad for a start - cute, light little verse - lose the quotation marks - somehow all the lines seem like the first line of a poem rather than flowing together!.!. I might have changed the order to set the scene first with lines 3 and 4 followed by lines 1 and 2 - If You want to write - don't give up - everyone's taste is different and some will like your work and others will hate it!. It is like art not everybody loves Picasso Www@QuestionHome@Com No!. You can't melt in eyes!. You might be able to melt in someone's look!. "Therefore" is not a particularly poetic word!. Saying that a cluttered mind stopped someone from seeing straight doesn't make sense - it's your eyes which have to be cluttered!. Or else say that your cluttered mind prevented you from making sense of what you saw!. There's no such thing as "the dawn of the night"!. You can say "the dawn of the day", if you mean morning, or "the twilight of the night " if you mean evening!. You can't say "the wind TO the storm" - " the wind OF the storm" might make better sense" If you use language in eccentric or odd ways, you shouldn't do so in a way which makes the reader stop and wonder what on earth you mean!. If you spoil the flow of the reader's thoughts, the reader will get fed up and stop bothering to try to work it out!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Hi there, Please don't misunderstand this but poetry is not something you think about maybe doing it is a source of life breathed out from the poets soul - anyone can put pen to paper but the art of poetry is emotion which comes to life on paper!. If you believe that what is in your soul transpires into poetry once on the page then it dose not matter if others think it is good because you will know that the story you have told is from the depths of your soul therefore interpreting pure honesty and that alone will give you satisfaction from writing!. As for the piece read over it again then write with emotion and honesty then you will see that yes you have in the depths of your soul the writings of a poet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I say if you have a love for writing then take writing classes!. Read, read, read published poets and learn how to construct poems!. Your poem doesn't make any sense but that's okay, it's your first attempt!. I wrote crap when I first started!. I learned how to write though by reading and studying how to write!. You also need to learn how to spell and use vocabulary!. Don't stop just because someone says this is crap!. Take it and make it something!. Each line of your poem could be the start of another poem!. Or, work with it to add other lines into it to make is make sense!. Okay!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Why are there in quotes!? You don't have to include quotes if you wrote it!. When you write read it to yourself aloud or silently so you can hear it how it sounds or how it flows!. Here's how I rewrote your poem: I nearly melted In his giant brown shinning eyes His mind was cluttered, Therefore he couldn't define The light was glistening On the dawn of the sky As trees were swaying In the wind of the night Can you see the difference when you read it!?Www@QuestionHome@Com i think you should post a full poem!. anyone can string a few words together!. try writing a full poem!. also, "poem wrighter," seriously!? you should probably learn basic spelling and grammar, you know!? (i think the word you were looking for was "poet")Www@QuestionHome@Com It's rubbish, Darlin', sorry!. First you do need to learn to spell, then get a few original ideas and lastly you must figure out what poetry actually is!. But, after all that it is good to write and be creative, so read some real poetry, learn and enjoy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com yeah its alright i spose not really into poetry isn't it meant to rhyme heres mine 3 little monkeys knocking at the door they came last night and the night before 1 had a fiddle 1 had a drum and 1 had a pancake stuck to his bum what u think!?Www@QuestionHome@Com it's a good start, you can certainly get better, and it may help if you spell writer correctly!. Www@QuestionHome@Com too many adjectives!.!.!. Giant Brown Shining eyes!.!.!.!.!.!.!. and grammatical errors at some parts!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Um, if thou shall not know how to spell writer than thou isn't a writer!. :) Www@QuestionHome@Com A good writer knows how to spell, punctuate and use proper grammar!.!.!.so there's your answer!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Feels good to write, doesn't it!? Www@QuestionHome@Com |