IS this a good poem? Easy ten points :D?

Question: IS this a good poem!? Easy ten points :D!?

Daddy never let go

Daddy never lets go!.!.!.!.!.
Whether hurt,
jealous,
angry,
sorrow,
Daddy never lets go!.!.!.!.
When I'm scared who's there daddy is!. When I need someone to hold my hand daddy's there!.

Daddy won't let go, and daddy will never let go!.

Whether on earth or up above your still there for me!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It's really good and heart warming!.

At the end though try this:

!.!.!.!.
angry,
or full of sorrow
Daddy never lets go!.!.!.
When I'm scared, daddy's there!.
When I need a hand, Daddy's there!.

Whether here on earth or up above:
Daddy won't let go!.

Thank you Daddy for always being there for me when I needed you!.

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If this is truly how you feel about your Daddy then no opinion will make a difference, I am sure that your Daddy will be oh so proud to receive such a heart felt poem for fathers day!. Treasure your relationship with him as not many get to have one of this nature with their fathers!. Well done and Good Luck!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's good, but will he appreciate the but 'or up above'!?
Just wondering!.!.!.
also, just proofread again,
Last line your should be you're
And also, 7th line I think should be split into four (assuming that the line shown as eighth is included in 7th):
When I'm scared, who's there!?
Daddy is!.
When I need someone to hold my hand,
Daddy's there!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

For father's day, it's a very good poem!. I like it very much!. It's like my dad!. He never let go of me even when I was ill and was under a lot of stress that made me depressed and angry!. I would give this to my Dad!.Www@QuestionHome@Com