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Question: Please help with the end of my poem!!?
It's for my yearbook, so far I have
As the sun sets,
on our middle school years,
lets not forget
the friendships, the memories,
and the knowledge we all gained!.
And as we move on to tomorrow,
to high school, we all _________

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Well no offense but i'm going to revise it!.

As the sun sets
on our younger years
Lets not forget the friendships
and the tears

Pictures may fade
and gather dust
but in a good memory
there's always trust

As we look on, towards tomorrow
There's always love and
There's always sorrow

Pain will come and pain will go
And many seeds you plant will grow
I'll see you in our tomorrow
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First, drop the all, generalities don't work and we is sufficient without all!. Think of the things you'll do, similar to what you've already done, but more since it builds on what you have!. You are moving on to high school, and into tomorrow!. Some things you will leave behind!. You'll be thrown into new class structures and relationships, there will be new experiences, learning, and friendships, as well as old ones that deepen and continue!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

!.!.!.dream of tomorrow's road that await us, dream of the future now and continue on the road that leads to a better tomorrow!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well it's not a poem, but I'll help you with an ending!.

open like flower petals to a new dawn!.Www@QuestionHome@Com