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I remember
I remember your first tooth!. I remember your first tears!.
I remember your first word And talking about your first fears!.
I remember your first day at school!. I remember your first book!.
I remember your first picture, And that you wanted to be a cook!.

I remember your first exam!. I remember your trembling knees!.
I remember your first boyfriend, And the talk about the birds and the bees!.
I remember exam results day!. I remember your emotions flowing!.
I remember the letter from uni, And I knew that you would soon be going!.

I remember graduation!. I remember your new job!.
I remember your happiness, And when you first met Bob!.
I remember that important meal!. I remember that special ring!.
I remember the wedding day, And the joy and happiness that it would bring!.

I remember that phone call!. I remember rushing to see!.
I remember becoming Granddad, And holding her close to me!.
Now you remember the spiral down!. Now you remember that I must!.
Now you remember the ashes to ashes, And you remember the dust to dust!.
Daniel Robert Mundy
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's amazing!. The poem really speaks to you; I can't find one thing that I would change!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's a lovely poem but a little sad at the end :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think it's good, but it depends on how old you are!.!. try much longer words if over 21!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

like the last one not the restWww@QuestionHome@Com

i love this one its brillent :)Www@QuestionHome@Com