Poets, beginning a poem on peace from a request, your comments and critique?

Question: Poets, beginning a poem on peace from a request, your comments and critique!?

I'll not talk of peace
Since we may not have it
To know security
Without fear that clouds our mind
Where we meet and see each
Other as our kind, with flesh
Much like our own and blood
That does not need
To stain the ground
Peace is found within
The place we begin to know
That others also have a place
And need for love just as we do
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I'll talk of peace
since it was writen before we speack
to love and trust the mind is kind with time that never peacks
listens to thoughs who seek its rime blood with in
a fine line only to know its true time of streangth!. The place will be home never alone only love packed in hard as stone a sent of a breez will all be free contaplating no more on what could be a new beegins a change for you and me!.!.!.!.Now you c our do yaWww@QuestionHome@Com

If you want peace, ask yourself what you are unwilling to give up in order to find it!? You can not find peace where there is no trust!. Peace is not an inactive process and it requires a lot more than talking!. Often it requires a lot of selfsacrifice!. Peace may be found within but quite often that is where it is lacking!. Jesus said "My peace I give unto you!.Not as the world gives it' Read for yourself john 14 verses27 to 31Peace on earth and goodwill to all mankind was not achieved at his birth but it will happen after he returns!. Very soon I hopeWww@QuestionHome@Com

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Fine words, facts!. A poem in the making!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

But do you think of yourself when you say these words, or the other person!.!.!. someone knows!.Www@QuestionHome@Com