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i return to my world, hidden away from all!. my head bowing down, thinking, Why have i tried!? hope is on the outside of these walls!. what comes before you, i can not replace!. this is what God gave me!. trials and troubles are all i have ever had!. they show upon my face!. hope is a word, nothing else!. Www@QuestionHome@Com


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Great prose, but there is always hope!. Trust me!. I thought there wasn't at one time and tried to kill myself!. Luckily I wasn't successful because I have learned that there is always hope!. When you have friends and loved ones you can use their strength to get you through anything!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hope is an elusive visitor, never having the roots one's soul desires and yet it's essence brushes our lives each day, some faint impressions indelible in our memories!.

The clamoring of hope is within us all, but hidden from most, and the search for that suggestion of relief and the anarchy of life is with us to the end!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

hip lady, we are so much alike, it seems!. Like you, I wear my life, in scars upon my skin, on my face in a furrowed brow and streaming tears!. And I, too, hide away in my own little world!. I have nearly given up hope before, only to have it restored, therefor I can tell you from experience that it is possible for all things to get better!. From all your posts, it is evident that you have been gifted more than you know!. Know that you are not alone!. Your friends can guard your hope for you until you are ready to accept it again!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

maybe "hope is a word, nothing else"

personally I'm not sure I see a way to agree,,, though some folks will hold that banner high!. then again, I am an eternal optimist and one of the true romantics

i would really like to see this with a bit more depth to it,,, a few more of your brush strokes for me to admire and ponder uponWww@QuestionHome@Com

i am going out i will while u read this

WHOA, YAHOO

I have to thank Yahoo for their kindness,
In letting me voice my air,
with all my friends across the globe!.
I have to thank them for what help they give
In my writing from early ’Truancy’
A maiden poem ,to a modern cry,
Chiromancy of poetry!.

I’d like to thank Robert Harrison of Australia,
Kroshta from Canada,
and Kya from UK,
David from USA,
for the poems, I make all day!.

The best profession for a jobless guy like me,
who is ever hungry of praise,
to his voice above
his desperate critics raise,
Yet hold no ill will of what they’ll think,
Sitting in the closet holding my head,
Taxing and wondering what will emerge,
As on the computer my fingers converge!.

I know no rhyme,
I have no time!.
All I know that my words do flow,
My mind is faster than my typing speed,
Please pay, do pay, to this some heed,
Kindly still my poems read!.

Some will still say what’s this crap,
I really do not care for that slap,
They are to be thanked for bearing me,
I am just a teenager can they see,
No not physically,
Yes mentally!.

I refuse to grow and you may still say,
In your true and inimical way,
Well are you a moron!?
Think what you will, but do not groan!.

Do please, do think as you desire,
But poems I will always at you fire,
Irrespective of what you say,
Whoa, what real poem it is today!.

‘’Hello Canada’’
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Hope is as true as 'hip' in your name!

It's not just a word for you & me & All!

From a word it is always there in our thoughts

So, there's chance you'll pul on with an eternal hope in hope, realized or not!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Being a silly person, I can easily get around the incosistancies in Caps and punctuation!. The phrases are very good, but poetry editors will jump this one because it never heard of the MLA!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like -- use of the computer has nothing to do with expressing poetic prose and that u didWww@QuestionHome@Com

Hope is a dangerous thingWww@QuestionHome@Com

I think hope is always around you!.!.!.!.!.!. You don't have to worry about anythingWww@QuestionHome@Com

Two thumbs up, that's all hope is!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com