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Question: When you heart is broken!.!.!.!.!.!.!?
is it best to place it in the middle of traffic!?


Taffic jammed
Slammed
To dirt
As hurt
Screeched in me
Beseeching me
To shelter
To belt her back
Return the attack
Spurning the smack
Down I received
Pariah perceived
Liar relieved to
Free floating
Not gloating
Star voting
Best dancer
My answer
is!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
Mine and mine alone




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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I am at this moment going to nickname you Dapper!.
Thump tha thump!. thumpthumpthathump

No rap here move along gangstaWww@QuestionHome@Com

Is this supposed to be rap!?

I hope so because it's not poetry!.

I can hardly figure out what you're talking about because most of these metaphors (weak metaphors at that) don't ahve any coherent image!.

If it's rap it's pretty good though!. At least as far as having complicated rhymes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Never, you start to mend it a piece at a time!.It takes a long time, but when it has been mended you once more hear
No more a foolish chump
No more in the throat a lump
Finally off my rump
Thump, thump, thump!.

Pretty silly after your well-written poem, but you get the message!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Okay so what is the question!? Oh right, "is it best to place it in traffic!?"; No, you should keep it and mend it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

As you know, I tried that walking in the middle of traffic route!.!.!.
not the way to go! Trust me on this!

maWww@QuestionHome@Com

I suppose the "rap" section of "answers" was full!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

i put a brick wall around mineWww@QuestionHome@Com

I am all for the free floating if the water aint too cold!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The poem!.!.!. I don't really dig!. The question, well I would stitch it up with a few friends and some Class A's!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

My heart has never been broken, It has been wounded many times,
and most likely shall be wounded again!. I think that's what happens to all our hearts!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I don`t know!.Www@QuestionHome@Com