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Question: Should i try and publish some of my poems!?
her's a few I've written lately!.!.!.!. idk, i'm a little scared of what a publisher would say!.!.!. they aren't great!.


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There's a fine line,
Between Heaven and Hell!.
You can walk down the stairs,
Or jump up the well!.

They can put on a smile,
Fake a sweet kiss!.
But deep down inside,
Harbor dark bliss!.

The eyes cannot see,
What the heart hides inside!.
The soul's a closed book,
Not a box open wide!.

A tear can be a trap,
And a smile a scheme!.
It's easy to put on a mask,
Make others dream!.

Be careful what you do,
Where your feet go!.
What the world plots,
No one can know!.

Forgetting how to Fly
She left a trail of bread crumbs,
Leading back to the grave!.
She hung her mask on the first tree,
And took the next one it gave!.

Once she walked upside down,
On the ceiling of the sky!.
But one day time stole her wings,
And she could no longer fly!.

The end of an old beginning,
But the beginning of a new end!.
Riding the wind with the ghosts,
Bearing wounds nothing can mend!.

Another Untitled
Trust the world to be what it is,
But trust it not at all!.
Time's indifferent to what it leaves behind,
Shadows on the wall!.

Believe in me in all that I do,
But expect for me to fail!.
Frailty is the price we pay,
Learn from the tale!.

Judge the world not with your heart,
Or your mind as the case may be!.
We only hear what we wish to hear,
And do not understand what we see!.

Pray to be wise,
But expect to be a fool!.
Try to be kind,
But know you'll be cruel!.

Hope to know the truth,
But understand you will be misled!.
Life's like a book with pieces in code,
We don't understand the whole chapter,
Only that which can be read!.

P!.S!. I'm worthless with titles! sorry!Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
If these are indeed your poems I believe you are very talented!. It sounds like you have been hurt before like you have a darker side to you ;) but definately my opinion GIFTED because I suck at poetryWww@QuestionHome@Com

of course you should
who CARES what some stupid publsiher says (if he denies it that is)

its worth the risk; maybe they will get published!

remember emily dickinson!? her poetry is kinda like yours!.!.!.except WAY more confusing!.!.!.!.but shes so famous right!?

so you should try,!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, you should!. You are a very talented individual!. I hope you get far with your work and send me a copy of your first book :DWww@QuestionHome@Com

yes you should try to publish em they are really good i can never write poetry and when i do it sucks alot ur talented at this and give it a shotWww@QuestionHome@Com

all publishers will love u

if you give them money honey they will publish it 4 u

and say thank uWww@QuestionHome@Com

definitely!.!.!.!.these are awesome!.!.!.!.!.never be afraid to try something!.!.!.!.it sounds like it comes from ur heart!.!.!.!.!.n that is what makes em better than most!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com