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Question: Hi Poets !!! I have 3 Poems 4 U 2 ReVieW :)!?
Hellooooooooo Everyone !!!
Please click on the links and let me know if u think it rocKs or SucKs !!! FaaaaaaaaaaaanX :)

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Btw, Any1 know how come my sign-in page went from Australia to Canada!? How is this possible when I signed in from AU !?!?!!!!
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
You have potential!. Editing would be where I would advise you to concentrate, grammar also!. You use strong images, make them stronger by not adding a lot of extra 'fluff' around!. Ask yourself if you would rather read a 3 paragraph description of a rose or two lines with each word dancing before ones eyes!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

very good, very honest in all senses!. !!!!!
very good!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com