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Question: Would you please comment on a morning thought!?
Encapsulated

Enclosed by a protective covering
new infant emerges from womb
mothers in the animal world
instinctively lick to remove
placenta from their young
thus releasing them to life!.

Yet, it's ironic, is it not
we spend the rest of our time
looking for someone or some thing
to offer lost protective covering
seeking to be encapsulated again!?Www@QuestionHome@Com


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now THAT I get!! that is awesome and so true!. thanks ma!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, it seems a bit ironic -but it really isn't!. The mother knows that the protection offered by the womb is different than the protection which is needed in life!. Children are protected by their families, clothing protects from the elements!. Devices such as helmets protect the cyclist, air bags protect the motorist, special clothing protects police & firefighters!. Drugs, sunblock and condoms offer forms of protection!. Protection is sought in religion, in governments, in gangs, in armies!. Yes, protection is something we all need and want, but as we grow it is no longer a "one size fits all" type!.
(My avatar is of a Chinese Dragon, which symbolizes both power and protection)!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think that is very good! It really explains beautifully that tension between wanting to be a good parent, yet knowing that we don't own our children, and we must step back and let them experience the world for themselves!. Yet nothing is harder than watching them make their own mistake, being inevitably scarred and bruised from the world, and wanting nothing more than to protect them!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

GOD said in the Bible "it is not good for man to be alone, I will create woman"!. HE stated too that man needed a "helpmate"!.

Basic human nature dictates being attracted to the opposite sex!. "Be fruitful and multiply"!.

Humans want to be loved!. Look at the world of nature and the same thing goes on with all mammals!. Even all creatures in the world seek out mates from bugs to fish to reptiles, to mammals/humans!.

GOD made up this way so that's got to be my answer!.

I seek now to be encapsulated!. I'm looking for a soulmate!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Don't you EVER stop posting in Poetry! It's in your soul! I LOVE this one although I'm SO glad I didn't have to lick my newborn daughter when she was born!! EEWWW! My comment on this poem is that it's absofriggenlutely beautiful! Thanks for the good morning thoughts in my head! They shall remain with me throughout the day! Hopefully till tonight when I have painful physical therapy to get through!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Is that kinda like spending the first two years teaching them to walk and talk, just to spend the next sixteen telling them to shut up and sit down!?


(And you post wherever you want, your questions will always pop up in that little "your contacts" window that holds up to three of your contacts questions or starred answers!.)
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Could it be said that - freedom is not all that it is made out to be!? After all the pains and heartaches - and congratulations on "having grown" - the solitude and encapsulated protection - sure looks good ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm not someone who comments on poetry on any morning - hardly, that is!. If I can not even comment on my own unwritten till way past sup, I don't have the mind to place it upon another of anyone's!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like the way you explain what we all need in our life!. we seek it out till we die!. it is a never ending fight to find that protection we all need!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very graphic, but wonderfully put!. Not so much poetry, but definately something to make people think deeper into the words!. Would love to hear other thoughts if this is what a morning thought brings you!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Huggles and snuggles
will always be needed
even the crotchedly, irritable meanies could do with a good hugging if you could get close enough to touch them!.

Is that an answer!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's a very interesting thought!.!.!.!.beautifully expressed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think it's because we were there for so long!.
We just can't help ourselves!. And we are creatures of love not just reproduction!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I fear that the life in me
may be the death of meWww@QuestionHome@Com

I could use another good licking!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Do you think we die alone!?

Now that's a thought to ponder!.
xWww@QuestionHome@Com

Well said, my friend!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it very much!! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

!.!.!.!.and so we write of butterflies and puppies
cocooning metamorphosely speaking
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It's true!. I sleep in the fetal position as well!. I wonder if I suck my thumb!.!.!.!.!. hmmmm!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Cuz mama I'm coming home!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I knew you couldn't leave it altogether!. and we all want to be protected, so we look for it!.?Www@QuestionHome@Com