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Question: What should I call this poem!? *ten easy pts*!?
When days grow colder
and nights grow long
and leaves start falling
and skin is covered up
I don't know what to do
without you there
by my side
though you never were there
Your by her side
standing small
She is standing bigger
Taller than you
So we are both small people
Smaller than her
Come stand by me
walking down the concrete
Smiling at my eyes
My eyes gazing at your smile
Holding your hand
Standing small
Okay so I wrote this really quick in like!.!.!.1 minute!. So I was thinking I would call this "Standing Small" or "Concrete Steps" but I don't know!. Help!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Concrete Steps is less obvious!.!.!.!. I like it better!.
or maybe Standing Better!? Signifying you and him are standing better together than her and him!.!.!.!. if thats what you are trying to convey!?
p!.s!. in line 9 it is "You're" :]Www@QuestionHome@Com
"Contemplant le Automne"
It sounds like it's set in fall isn't it!? It also has a sense of continual walking throughout!. So walking in the fall!. One might get the idea that you wrote this while on a midnight stroll through the sea of chilly autumn leaves!. Thinking about this guy!.
So I think Contemplant le Automne is fitting!. It's French for Contemplating the Autumn!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Concrete Steps,
I think it's more creative and a less obvious choice!.
I think that Standing Small gives you an idea of what the poem is about, but Concrete Steps keeps you wondering and intrigued!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Umm I think you should call it standing small!. and you know what's funny!.!.!. i didn't see that you had that written until after i wrote my answer!. =]Www@QuestionHome@Com
Comforting smileWww@QuestionHome@Com
Standing Small is a good name since it is the only repeated stanza in your poem
HOpe this helps:DWww@QuestionHome@Com
Hmm, I like standing small!. maybe, never standing tall!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
call it standing small on concrete steps!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
"Ode to Nothing"Www@QuestionHome@Com
summers nightWww@QuestionHome@Com