Can I have some opinions on my poem that I wrote!?

Question: Can I have some opinions on my poem that I wrote!!?

Ok!. It's kinda sketchy I wrote it during school and it was fast!.!.!.But here it is!.!.!.

I just don't know what happened
I thought you were the one
You were everything that I wanted
And everything that I thought we could be!.
But I guess we lost it
I'm done with denying that I miss you
Because it's true that I do
But I know it can't work between us,
And that I can't be with you!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I think leaving the end like it is, is actually a good way to end it!. It sounds like a song almost toss in a rhyme here and there and you have yourself a song!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i hate love poems because they just showcase the cattlesque nature of human beings!.!.!.so homogenous and dull

and you know what's sad!.!.!. I felt the same way when my first boyfriend broke up with me

i hate love poetry because it showcases that behind curtains of grandiose, humans are just basically the same: lovesick, lonesome, and dependent

sorry for this rant!.!.!. its not personal and I don't pretend to be above this poem because I have felt the same wayWww@QuestionHome@Com

I'm sorry for this ending
I didn't want it to stop
My heart is bending
I will soon drop
please do not be angry
for I am sad
to end this happiness
this wonderfulness
but I cannot be mad
for there was a reason
for it to stop!.

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its good :)Www@QuestionHome@Com