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Alone Footsteps Heartbeat of the city Street lamps cast distorted shadows on rain soaked streets Heartbeat Casting glances to and fro Two heartbeats Footsteps Growing louder Faster Eyes wide with fear GIVE ME YOUR WALLET MOTHER ******! White light Pain Blood mixes with sweat Mixes with rain Mixes with fear SOMEBODY Please help me!.!.!.!.!.!.!. One heartbeat FootstepsWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I am a published poet and I see the makings of one but you and I both know it's not finished!.Www@QuestionHome@Com a poem is a composition in verse, esp!. one that is characterized by a highly developed artistic form and by the use of heightened language and rhythm to express an intensely imaginative interpretation of the subject!. So with that said the way you used your words and described this robbery is a form of poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It's a poem! Definitely! It comes under free verse!.!.!. Poetry is but an expression of ones thoughts in the form of words!.!.!. Does it matter if they rhyme or follow a meter!? I'd definitely say it's a poem and a very good one at that! But it seems a bit incomplete!.!.!. I'd love to see the whole one if you think so too! Www@QuestionHome@Com Art is multi discipline!.It is art if it is accepted by others!. It is poem if it is accepted!. I would consider it poetry, An impressionistic poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com sure!.!.!. it kinda reminds me of those drama clubs or jazz club places where they have slow pink panther type music running in the background as they act out a "lyrical" speech thing!. Is there a name for this!? lolWww@QuestionHome@Com More than considered!. It is!. Www@QuestionHome@Com It could be!. It kinda leaves a bit to be desired, but I suppose it is a poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Absolutely!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Depends!.Www@QuestionHome@Com yeah, it is, its good as by the way! good job!Www@QuestionHome@Com Of course! Anything can be a poem, any group of words that is! This is a good poem, it doesn't have to rhyme!Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes, and it pretty mother ******* good!Www@QuestionHome@Com It's not just a great poem but a way of life in my neighborhood!Www@QuestionHome@Com Looks more like a list than a poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Yeah, it's a poem, a story poem!.!.!. pretty good in fact!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Cool!. Yes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes!. It's really good!. Good job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Sounds more like a narrative to me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes, it certainly can!Www@QuestionHome@Com HELL NO wtf is that!?!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com It could!. Lyrics are in their own right poems too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It's more than that; it's a mugging!Www@QuestionHome@Com Free verse beat poem!.!.!. I think so :) If you write it to be a poem, then I think it is a poem my friend!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Interesting!.!.!.www!.poetry!.com-I hope you win!Www@QuestionHome@Com wow!.!.!.nice work!Www@QuestionHome@Com yes, and it rocks!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com No!.Www@QuestionHome@Com yes! i doesnt have to rhym to be a poem, it just has to make sense its good thoughWww@QuestionHome@Com |