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Question: Had to get it off my chest!.!.!.!. I Can't Have Her!?
I'm gonna sit back relax and tell you and bout this girl
How she, without a warning just came and shook my world
She compliments my swag and has rhythm in her curves
Eyes that hypnotize
Voice that mesmerize
And to no Surprise
Smile equal to the Sunrise
Smart doesn't do her justice, brilliant will be the word
Laughter so sweet, an angel is what i heard
Got a little bad girl in her, man it's so sexy
I can be everything she needs!.!.!.!.if she just lets me
It won't happen though, you see this girl is taken
All wrapped up in love, my heart is left forsaken
I can't be the only one who's found magic in this girl
Wouldn't surprise me if she had a lock on whole world
SO i'll fall back, yea i'll do that for you
gotta be cool, cause i got a girl at home too!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I like it!. I could actually hear a rap song when I read it!.
Nice arrangement of beats!.
Great imagery!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I can relate with the wound wrapped up in the costumes of this cool poem!.
Be strong!.

shisir http://delhibylanes!.blogspot!.com/
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Nicely done! =)Www@QuestionHome@Com