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Question: Which is the most noblest!?
Stalking lonely
The lion stalks its prey
survival, primordial calls
no more, no less, it feeds
Hunter stalks the prey too
not primordial, just a game
no more, no less, it hunts
Lion sated, shade retreats
while Hunter hunts different prey,
rose souls with petals fresh
Words entice, perfumed sweet
the lonely prey pause, mesmerized
Hunter feeds, petals fall
Lion sated, Hunter not
the Hunter hunts, new prey awaits
trails of fallen petals
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I like the message you send in this one, and in my opinion, the lion is the more noble!. Or is it nobler!? Or noblest!?
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I think you are talking about my ex-husband!.He is the hunter,always looking for new prey!.He leaves behind broken hearts or trails of fallen petals!.But the one who is really lonely is the ex-husband!.The noble ones are the lions who were only looking for survival, someone to make them happy!.But then what do I know!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
no nobility in any hunt
just a result!.
unless your just hunting for nobility
which is like baking cookies
just to get crumbs!.
thats a bad hunt!.
i like how you brought the rose color
and fallen petals in for visual!.
your reads are always smooth Mr Light
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Does the hunter eat the meat, tan the hide, carve the claws!?
Does the lion teach the pride with killing games!?
It's all the same, it's all a shame!.
Soon the big cats will be gone, and lions replaced
with paper tigers!.
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An interesting story, told poetically!. Is the hunter frustrated!? I can't tell!. The hunt can be more of an enticement than the prey!. I only hunt with a camera and haven't done that in years!.
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Sometimes the lion
stalks the hunter
no nobility, only need
Sometimes the hunt
takes both together
game primordial, awful deed
Loneliness may speak with flowers
fallen petals passing sweet
praying prey, hunter starvesWww@QuestionHome@Com
Let the fallen petals
Claim nobility
The Hunter hunts, who hunts the Hunter!?
Time, of course
Patient, yet creeping up slowly
No more, no less, he dies
Nothing escapes the scythe
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Of late I have been thinking of serial killers!. You pull me back there with your Hunter!. Why!? Beats me!.
The lion stays fresh as the noblest one!.
I said it before and I'll say it again
"All hunters are nimrods"Www@QuestionHome@Com
The most noble hunter may become a prey, as nobility makes an easy target for arrogance and/or those nob hunters!
as usual, neonman, well penned! Www@QuestionHome@Com
I smelt flowers and!.!.!.!.*sniffs* !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.BLOOD!?!!!.!. ARGH!!.!.!.!.!.*runs away*
I'd prefer being hunted by TahDa's origami tigers and lions I would put them in the shredder if they tried any funny business!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Hunting for sustenance is never wrong!. Sometimes the heart can be insatiable!. But, sometimes people just like to shoot their gun!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
You can't kill love by hunting it, can you!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Waste not want not, check my motives, KudosWww@QuestionHome@Com
Depends on the caducity of the bush!.Www@QuestionHome@Com