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Question: Do you like "Lady Wisdom"!?
Lady Wisdom

Mining through every mountain
I sought her as precious gold
When diving into a fountain
The fortune found was untold

Beyond my wildest desire
Gold doesn’t compare to her fruit
This lady refined my fire
Being worth my every pursuit

Perfect pearls are adorned on this dove
She is obviously sent from above
As she brings much peace and love

My dear brings great treasure
She soothes me to health
I get immense pleasure
With another kind of wealth

With your beauty galore,
Nothing on this earth can compare
Lady wisdom I want you more
Because you are so rare

Ive got to work on the rhythm, but what do you think of the scheme!. By the way its not actually about a personWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I liked it, it was some what different and abstract how you wrote about nature like that and the thing your writing about showing all of these marvelous things!.

Correct me if I'm mistaken but if this poem isn't about a human then is it about the dove you mention!?Www@QuestionHome@Com