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Darkness is easy to see Walking in the Light

Now that the sun is shining down
It’s easier to see darkness all around
Even though my weather is now placid
The world is being soaked in acid

Directly there is a new confliction
Along with a freshly born affliction
Likened to existing in a hurricanes center
Watching others outside not able to enter

Winds are extreme beyond the eyewall
They are mean and only enthrall

Even in the storm’s core
Where wind blows no more
Not all is peaceful with silence
The seas are rough with violence

There is well-known future pain on self
When drowning under the ocean’s shelf
But watching another ripped by the tide
Is painful as well, I must confide!.

Even though I’m prospectively well,
It hurts that others are torn to hell!.
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Very emotional! Great use of metaphors !.!.!. makes one think!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

so great
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