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Question: What do you think of my poem!?The Beauty in Me!?
The Beauty in Me

In my bed, snuggled up at last, looking to the days ahead and remembering those of past!. I wonder what I have learned and what I am teaching, who I have helped and who I am reaching!.

I am growing through trial and error a never ending road to self discovery!. As I learn to believe in myself, possibilities seem endless!. My ability to take action allows me to build confidence and experience for a richer life!.

Just as lilies blossom and butterflies emerge, so too is the beauty in me!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Why do people think just because they write it's poetry!? Why!?

Yes, it's a wonderful message, yes the last image is pretty, but where is any of that poetry!? Did you actually sit down before writing this and ask yourself "What is a poem!?" Or did you just assume since you're talking about beauty and flowers and butterflies that it was a poem!?

Trope!. Metaphor!. For the love of all that is poetic, trope and metaphor!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's very good and the title matches the mood of the poem very well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow that almost made me cry!. very very nice!.

i say its book worthy!.

im not much into poems but that was great!.Www@QuestionHome@Com