Please give feedback on my poem "What is't this Pain?"?

Question: Please give feedback on my poem "What is't this Pain!?"!?

What is’t this pain!?

What is’t this pain within
That starts out with a simple grin
From times long ago the winds gently blow
Warming the soul
To a cold winter snow
The cycle is fierce
Intensity to pierce
The strongest of minds
No logic to confine, only what is, is mine
To be enjoyed as best can, be revered by all man
A tear from the soul, it’s what makes us whole!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I like it, you should keep writing, you have talent!.
Good poetry is expressions of ones self!.
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love it!. keep up the good work!. 10/10!. dont let that other mess with you!. poetry is the the expression of the soul, her dad was probably a english teacher or some bull!.
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i really like it!. i have nothing bad to say about it!.

can you read my story!.
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I hate to be harsh, but this is not poetry!Www@QuestionHome@Com