Clean the crusted stench
from your hapless rhyme
and we will consider going
through the thorns
to get
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from your hapless rhyme and we will consider going through the thorns to get to the treasures!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I don't think so!.!.!.it's pretty clearWww@QuestionHome@Com Ah, the stench needs a wrench and rhyme obviously some thyme but going!.!.!.a lot can go with going thorny thorns inflict pain like horns all for treasure and it's pleasure!? And in the end!.!.!.let's stick with yours no rhyme needed there!Www@QuestionHome@Com You can rhyme if it if you want it's up to you I like short poems too however you can a bit more here on this poem too!. Www@QuestionHome@Com No, there's no reason it has to rhyme!. "Well, we've got no class We've got no principals We've got no innocence We can't even think of a word that rhymes" -Alice Cooper, "School's Out"Www@QuestionHome@Com I think it is great the way it is!. The thoughtfulness and conciseness is almost haiku-like in nature!. Follow your muse!Www@QuestionHome@Com You are hilarious!.!.!.!.do not write poetry when you are thinking about the Vikings or is this a poem about the special teams!?Www@QuestionHome@Com No, this one shouldn't, nor should any others where rhyme sacrifices the pack of the punch!. maWww@QuestionHome@Com the only crusted stench is in your underwear!Www@QuestionHome@Com Obviously not!.Www@QuestionHome@Com as long as there are!.!.!.!. !.!.!.!.!.!.!.sausages to feast on!.!.!.!.!. !.!.!.rhymes!.!.!.!.!. !.!.!.!.!.should be the least of our concern!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Seems fine to me, I find my treasures under a field of cowpats!. About one diamond per thousand on a good day!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Spoken like an Editor!!Www@QuestionHome@Com it is good just the way it is!. i love the DMag wayWww@QuestionHome@Com I don't think so!.!.!.but if you put, !.!.!.to the treasures, in time!. It would rhyme!. Www@QuestionHome@Com No, because all poems do not rhyme!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com Is it pirate day again!?!Www@QuestionHome@Com No!Www@QuestionHome@Com i dont think so its a rly good poem u should leave it how it isWww@QuestionHome@Com Yes!. and it could be a little longer!.Www@QuestionHome@Com No, seems good the way it is!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |