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Question: Should this poem rhyme!?
Clean the crusted stench
from your hapless rhyme
and we will consider going
through the thorns
to get
to the treasures!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I don't think so!.!.!.it's pretty clearWww@QuestionHome@Com

Ah, the stench needs a wrench
and rhyme obviously some thyme
but going!.!.!.a lot can go with going
thorny thorns inflict pain like horns
all for treasure and it's pleasure!?

And in the end!.!.!.let's stick with yours
no rhyme needed there!Www@QuestionHome@Com

You can rhyme if it if you want
it's up to you
I like short poems too
however you can a bit more here
on this poem too!.
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No, there's no reason it has to rhyme!.

"Well, we've got no class
We've got no principals
We've got no innocence
We can't even think of a word that rhymes"
-Alice Cooper, "School's Out"Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think it is great the way it is!. The thoughtfulness and conciseness is almost haiku-like in nature!. Follow your muse!Www@QuestionHome@Com

You are hilarious!.!.!.!.do not write poetry when you are thinking about the Vikings or is this a poem about the special teams!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

No, this one shouldn't, nor should any others where rhyme sacrifices the pack of the punch!.

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the only crusted stench is in your underwear!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Obviously not!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

as long as there are!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.!.!.!.!.sausages to feast on!.!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.rhymes!.!.!.!.!.

!.!.!.!.!.should be the least of our concern!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Seems fine to me, I find my treasures under a field of cowpats!. About one diamond per thousand on a good day!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Spoken like an Editor!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

it is good just the way it is!. i love the DMag wayWww@QuestionHome@Com

I don't think so!.!.!.but if you put,
!.!.!.to the treasures, in time!.
It would rhyme!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

No, because all poems do not rhyme!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Is it pirate day again!?!Www@QuestionHome@Com

No!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i dont think so its a rly good poem u should leave it how it isWww@QuestionHome@Com

Yes!. and it could be a little longer!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

No, seems good the way it is!.Www@QuestionHome@Com