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Question: Ever Had A Neighbour Like This Poem!?
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Ever brought a house that has a chatter box living next door!?
Who thrives on day to day gossip and a bit more!.
You hear about their life problems, plus the lady's who lives up the road,
As she stands there waiting for you to come in or out of your abode!.

Ever brought a house with a story maker living next door!?
How interesting your life becomes, with extra juicy bits added galore!.
One minute you have a boyfriend, then the next you have ten,
I don't know how I did it romancing ten men!.

In case you haven't gathered, I'm living next to one
With my life changing immensely, its a wonder this poem is done!.
Some stages its gone beyond the joke, with slander on my list
I have tried being polite and nice with her only to persist!.

I gaurantee you next time, there won't be anyone living next door
As I'm planing on acreage, 5 acres or more!.
Just the thought of no neighbours to cause me trouble and strife,
I'll be able to restore my harmonious life!.

Written by me R!. Norman

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Quite humorous! But needs a bit of revision,Www@QuestionHome@Com

I liked it, and I thought it was funny!.
I do think, however, that it doesn't flow very well!.
There are too many unnecessary fillers!. Maybe clean it up a bit!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yup!. Bad neighbour, bad poem!. Could improve it with a little work and you need to learn to spell!. Was a good idea though!.Www@QuestionHome@Com