I am writing a poem...it's incomplete, but is it any good?

Question: I am writing a poem!.!.!.it's incomplete, but is it any good!?

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Fiction , no facts!. Lies , no truths… yet so real!. Surreal!. If I appear to be all that you want me to be … am I really me !?

If you love me for who I am and I am not myself … will you still love me!?

To forgive is Honorable!. To forget… dementia !. Is it possible to do both and remain sane!?

Loved by many !. Hated by plenty!. Is this my fault!? Does it matter… that I don’t care!?

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Yes, absolutely! Keep going! Your style is unique!. I'm intrigued!.

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Add the line "for truth is stranger than fiction" ~Helen Waterford!.

I like it so far, but i suggest making better use of the lines!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's a little pretentious if i'm honest, i don't see any real point in your form and style!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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yes, def worth it!!!!! keep going on it!Www@QuestionHome@Com