Sleeping waters!. Still!.
Polished!. Perfect reflections!.
Streetlights sparkle liquid!.
Dawn rainbows upon black
Trees!. Sentinels!.
A boat passes!. The
Bayou shatters into
Diamonds!.
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Polished!. Perfect reflections!. Streetlights sparkle liquid!. Dawn rainbows upon black Trees!. Sentinels!. A boat passes!. The Bayou shatters into Diamonds!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: well, missy E,,, this bit of verse has catapulted me from funk into smiles,,, the images are crystal clear and finer than diamonds!. thank you!. Www@QuestionHome@Com A scene similar to many I have seen over the years, and it always lifts me up!. One exception was a river in Vietnam at dawn, calm, mirrored reflections in totally ripple-less water!. Then a North Vietnamese gunboat passed, and there was the sound of heavy weapons mixed with light, a large explosion, and instead of diamonds, the water's surface was as rubies!. Yours is much more desirable!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Peaceful evening boat rides, the wake sparkles in the light!. Calming, & beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I loved this!. It must be beautiful in the Bayous!. I don't like the Skeeters and Alligators tho'!. But since you didn't mention them, this is purrrrrfect!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Except for the trees, I see this scene and those diamonds every morning as I watch sunrise over the Bay!. I am always in awe!. It is most beautiful when the sailboats pass!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Amazingly fabulous description! The final 3 lines are a poem in its own regard!. So beautiful!!Www@QuestionHome@Com A little slice of Heaven ,,,,,,Until that Damn boat passed!!,,,, The images of this are powerful Feels as if I am there looking out across the waterWww@QuestionHome@Com Beautiful!. Nothing else describes it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com A very nice way to be woken!. I can hear the diamonds splashing through the silence!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Magnificent!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This one is short but sweet!. I like it!.!.!.!. !.!.!.kinda reminds me of a lazy hazy day!.!.!.!. then all of a sudden!.!.!.!.someone throws a rock in the water!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This do sparkle, with few words too, KudosWww@QuestionHome@Com You take me there!.Well written!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I love that I can 'see' your poems!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Your ending made this special!. My compliments!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Lovely images as I go to bed! Thanks, for assured good dreams!Www@QuestionHome@Com |