Would you comment on this poem, my first nonet?

Question: Would you comment on this poem, my first nonet!?

Poetry
by C!.S!. Scotkin

Hold your breath as words, those shooting stars
fall ever closer to your mind
white hot signal flares for all
these streaking brilliant ones
flashing through our minds
explode old thoughts
with beauty
and new
truth!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Thanks C!.S Scotkin!

I had never heard of a "Nonet" before! so thanks for this !.!.
it was in a word stuck-on-my-mind beautiful! ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com

The Nonet is not my favorite poetic form, but it does allow for a coherent image!. I like the metaphor of words as 'shooting stars!." I believe that 'fall' does not describe exactly what a meteor does!. 'Aim' or 'rush' would probably describe the event more precisely, especially since you then use words like 'flashing' and 'explode!.'Www@QuestionHome@Com

Indeed, I do like it! I can see why it is called a no-net, because by the time you reach the end there is nothing left!. Your imagination in the metaphor or words and stars, compared all the way through the poem is excellent!.tWww@QuestionHome@Com

hey great poem! did you say hi was your first!? because it definately should not beyour last!. keep on writing and the flow will come to you, and so will tthe right words at he rigt time, keep it up!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Heavenly body!. Love it!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yeppers, you did a nonet!.
but my puppy did a no-no!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Lovely!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

very niceWww@QuestionHome@Com

You've done a very nice first nonet!. I have yet to try one of these!.!.!.add that to my list!Www@QuestionHome@Com

sounds so poeticWww@QuestionHome@Com

Nicely Done!!! !.,,,,,And a Good Night to you,,,,Www@QuestionHome@Com