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Question: Does anyone really know what time it is!?
It's good to be 'on time' or you'll get 'time off'!
Time in a bottle get's you 'sustained time'!.
Time released get's you 'time', 24/7!
Half-time, full-time; How much I wonder is 'part-time'!?
Does the time line stretch the 'boundaries of time'!?
Bank on time with 'daylight savings time'!
If you only have a fraction of time,
multiply your time and get 'time and a half'!
Does a stitch in time mean the 'time's sewn up'!?
Save time so you don't fall on 'hard times'!
Too much time is a 'time warp'!
Time waits for no one so, how do you 'make up for time'!?
Capture time in a 'time capsule'!
If you have daytime, nighttime, where does 'overtime' fit in!?
Time stands still, when!?
Though you might beat time, don't kill time or you'll 'do time' for sure!
Turn back the hands of time for 'delayed time'!
Is 'some other time', 'time since'!?
Post time in the 'time zone'!.
It's better to be ahead of time than be ,'behind the times'!
Hey-we're ahead of time so we got 'time left'!
Time on a dime means 'fast times' these days!
Time passes when you're having fun!. What happens in the 'meantime'!?
The time is at hand so, you'd better heed time!
Time's a wasting and soon you'll have 'lack of time'!
Is Father Time the 'time keeper!?
Take a bite out of time, it's 'chow time'!
Shpping time costs a whole lot more than 'time spent'!
There's time to work and time to play,
harvest time and time for a heyday!
You can have 'some time, anytime but,
'Time everlasting' is a long time!
Where does the time go!?
Time flies away!
The 'end times' means there no more time left!
So, take your time and 'use your time wisely'!


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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The entire philosophy of this poem is very smart and is delivered as well as it can be!.!.!.!.!.or!.!.!.!.

As I read it, I almost want it to change moods by losing some of the exclamation points and having some of the "time" references seem boring or mundane!. I believe that some "time" truly is just a slogging through of menial things!. A crescendo or change of theme could occur as you describe more meaningful aspects of time and bring the reader along with you, building up to your "end times" as a last note, maybe a couplet!.
Look back at each subject of "time" and see if there is a progression of importance that could be used to flow us through to the end of the poem!.


Very nice!Www@QuestionHome@Com

This time you've gone to far!. When people don't have time for the man above, yet, find time to read your poems may be some of the best time normal people can have that reflects on the time we all have left to really learn the truths that are worth our time learning!.

Very good and I think you've timed it just right!.

Very thought provoking!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

you have too much time on your hands!.
how do you wash time off your hands!?
you are wasting time!.
How do you conserve time, when it passes it's gone!.
Isn't time used wisely a judgment call!?
Enjoy the minute you are in, you will never get it back to do it over!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very good Glow i loved that but we would like time to let time stand still!. Time goes on by more quickly than we would like it to!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Time is an idea and what you wrote are ideas about that idea!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love this, the time spent here, was time well spent indeed!Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's always 5:00 somewhere, that's what time it is!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

great poem, and i wish you well with your next poem!.
great job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Did you write that!? That was so unique whether you wrote it or not!. But yet i still can't cope with time!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

that was cute!. pretty creative too!. good job!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

lol, that's true!
i took 'time' to read that, but it certainly wasn't 'wasted time'

<3 Meriam!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

lol, thats really good! I actually like this one more than you other poem!

keep it up!=0)Www@QuestionHome@Com

haha I like it, it took me a bit of time to read!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

My dear friend, Carole!.!.!.

You sure are a little genius when it comes to your creative poetry, honey!!! And you are sooooo RIGHT "on top"!.!.!.because we all know "what time it is", but we do NOT know!.!.!.!.HOW LATE it actually really is!.!.!.!.!!!! I mean!.!.!.some of us may not "wake-up" tomorrow!.!.!.because our "next day" is NOT!.!.!.guaranteed !!!

You are soooo right, Carole!.!.!.I really enjoyed it (copied it as well)!.!.!.!.Keep up your great work and thanks for sharing it with me !!! May god bless you continously throughout your precious life!.!.!.!.Sending you all my best wishes from Germany with all my love & care!.!.!.your friend at heart & soul!.!.!.!.Annette***Www@QuestionHome@Com