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Question: What do you think of this little story!?
"You know me, you know!. We were great friends!. I caressed you when you were young, and messed up your hair as a child!. We used to have fun messing up the piles of leaves that your sisters would rake up in the fall!. In the winter I made beautiful displays with the snowflakes, and built hills of snow for you to jump in!. In Summer you would climb the trees and I would rock them back and forth, and cool you down!. But now you are older and have forgotten me and retreated inside!. And I have been sad, howling at night!. Come back to be me and we will enjoy ourselves again, Me and you, your friend!.!.!. the wind!.!.!."Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
wow!.
im pretty stunned!.
that was very well written!.
and it kind of made me sad,
but wow!.
i liked it!.
=)

In the winter I made beautiful displays with the snowflakes, and built hills of snow for you to jump in!.- favorite lineWww@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds like the wind has great love - for this child ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

i really liked it

(maybe you could try it in verse though)
that would be coolWww@QuestionHome@Com

it's so great
it actually made me feel kind of sadWww@QuestionHome@Com