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Question: Poem!?do you like it ,tell me what do you see in it!?
For whom I will write this letter,,
I have no one but my
My heart
How are you!?
How is your aorta!? , how are your blood vessels
Are you still in pain!?
Though you’re dead!?
Don’t be funny now, dead don’t feel, and you are so cold to understand,
How can you be cold and burned!?
Stop being so silly because it cant be real, its all fake
Tell me my heart
Did his image across your page
In the end
Or start
Tell me!?
How your days are are passing
Dull or exciting
Or you are just waiting
Till I can be brave
Enough to change
The face of the earth
And disappear
From my grave
Be honest
Because this is the only thing
Left
In me
And you


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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Very thought provoking!.!.!.!.!.!.I loved the line (don't be funny now, dead don't feel, and you are so cold to understand!.) Great line which broke the expected seriousness but it still maintained its depth with a touch of humor and irony and a serious air at the same time!. Not sure if I understand it 100% but that is part of the intrigue!. I love to write poetry too!.!.!.!.!.
This is a really great poem!. Enjoyed reading it!. Thanks!

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