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Question: What do you think of this!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
We had a fight

You walked yourself out

You got in the car

I heard you shout


You drove too fast

Did you get a rush!?

You died that night

Under the car; crushed


I got the call

Picked up the phone

I heard the news

Turned into a stone


Then it hit

You were not here

The silence was loud

And then there was fear


At 17 years old

Would God damn you to hell!?

I couldn't fight the tears

And then I fell


I loved you so much

You never did know

We turned away angry

I walked very slow




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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I don't know!. I think it's wonderful already!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

take out turn to stone and put inthen it hit then for then it hit put i was alone IT IS GOOD THOUGHWww@QuestionHome@Com

oh my god it's beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com