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Question: Do you like this Poem!? also Judge it!!?
And if you can, try and guess the answer, because its a riddle:

"Down to the Top"

It's all twisted upside down!.
Totally impossible, but all have done!.
Only slaves can take the crown!.
To leave the heat, follow the Sun!.

Down to the top in a joyful fury!.
Everything there; none at all!.
With a dirtless crop; a timeless hurry!.
Immortal death; Divine shall fall!.

The ultimate Paradox
It makes perfect sense!.
To open with locks
All life's suspense!.

Please judge the poem with helpful criteria, and if you have the answer, tell me!. If you are trying the riddle, the answer is actual matter- not a concept!. So don't say apocolypse, death, life, time, etc!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
this poem is really good, it rhymes, makes sense, and has flow all at once, ad that is incredibly hard to do, so keep it up and keep writing, cuz everything only gets better in time!Www@QuestionHome@Com

sky diving!!!!!!!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com