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Question: Could you rate my poem 1-10!?
i wrote this for my gf, we are ina long distance relationship!.
You and Me
This was meant to be
Together, you and me
You can make no mistakes
Without you, my hearts aches
Don’t think about it to much
I yearn for your touch
Just think with our heart
And we will never grow apart
What do you believe!?
Together we can achieve
We can reach the end of the land
Our victory so grand
So let’s go, and drift away
Escape from this intolerable grey
Let’s see the colors the world can present
A beautiful way for our lives to be spent
I know this distance is great
But you and I are fate
You have a beautiful face
Your voice makes my heart race
Don’t you ever feel lonely
You are my one and only
You’re always on my mind
Our lives are intertwined
Don’t get me wrong
You and I will have to be strong
Patience is key
Someday just you and me
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
awe
i give it a
10
it is just so cute!.
i loved it!.
and
so will she i bet!.
awe!!!!
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I'd give it a 4 but if I was your girl, probably much higher!. The content shows you are in love and it's a sweet poem!. However, if you are serious about it than you must deal with punctuation because you have none!. also, because you want it to rhyme you are choosing the most basic words in the english language!. A thesaurus is a great way to chose other words to say what those basic words say!.
If you are just looking to impress the girlfriend, it's a great start!.
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I like it, It touches me in a good way, I don't mean GAY! I have been writing poems for years now!. I have over 2000 poems and I have a few on the net as well!. Good luck, I give it a 10!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Awww!. You girlfriemd will surely appreciate it!.
I give it a 6!. It is decent, but not amazing or original!.
But nonetheless, it is good =]Www@QuestionHome@Com
6 !.!.!.cant be a song!.!.!.
cant be a haikuWww@QuestionHome@Com
6!. Work on imagery and use punctuation a bit more!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Typical love poetry,but marginally excellent!.I rate it as 7/10Www@QuestionHome@Com
8 and 1/2Www@QuestionHome@Com
8Www@QuestionHome@Com
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aww she'll love it!Www@QuestionHome@Com