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Question: If you have loved and lost, would you be starving now!?
have you
killed her and
stuffed her in a box
folded her tortured spirit
key strong lock ready
squeezed pushed shoved her
inside blindsided bare knocked out
you,now blacked out yelling get in there
Arms flailing you fall over scramble fumble
flip the lock engage the key lock ah take stock
ears closed to muffled screams while your head rolls
your heart fears dread shreds your penis bursting squirt
squirt squirt squirt pounding hurts,hurts oh my god does it ever
but!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.over and over you will until there are two left standing
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Whut the Hail
by Granny Crabtree
There may not be enough ho-made lemonade
To cool that tortured pome you made
The world is hard and love gets creepy
From Oregon to the Missiseepy
I've tried to influence in a grandmotherly way
YOU, dear granddaughter not to say!.!.
Wurds like 'penis'!.!.!.'squirt' and 'box'
It just makes bad men grab their!.!.!.spiral bound
Notebooks and write pomes back to you!.!.
Like Francis is about to do!.!.!.
Don't stuff fokes in no stanky trunk
Drink ho-made lemonade
!.!.!.!.to cure the funk!.!.!.!.!.luv, AgnooseWww@QuestionHome@Com
Yes, very intense!.!.!.!.Here's the words of a 16th century French poetess for you, Louise Labé:
I Live, I Die, I Burn, I Drown by Louise Labe
I live, I die, I burn, I drown
I endure at once chill and cold
Life is at once too soft and too hard
I have sore troubles mingled with joys
Suddenly I laugh and at the same time cry
And in pleasure many a grief endure
My happiness wanes and yet it lasts unchanged
All at once I dry up and grow green
Thus I suffer love's inconstancies
And when I think the pain is most intense
Without thinking, it is gone again!.
Then when I feel my joys certain
And my hour of greatest delight arrived
I find my pain beginning all over once again!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
Farmer Crabtree has a point!. Lol!.
But I actually liked it!. Not because it spoke to me or any crap like that!.!.!. But it was very intense (as everyone keeps saying)!. And I also like the format!? is it called!? No!. the shape of the paragraph!.!.!. lol!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
A bit violent, twisted and quite intense actually!.
The boys won't like to hear of shredded penis parts though *curls toes*Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yore porch looks inviting can I bring along the Crabtree's over for tea and sympathy!?
I need a cup of tea lets all have one shall we!? And calm down a bit!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I have and i am not, in fact i am just going to have some lunch after a hearty breakfast!.
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No to none of the above!
Am not fond of your poetry,
and am not sorry to say!Www@QuestionHome@Com
good poem for Halloween!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
um, its nice!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com