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Question: Help, I want to write a love poem but I need some help!?
Any tips or anything you can provide to help me would be greatly appreciated!. I want to ask her out in a romantic way if that helps!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


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Dont start by trying to write a poem, or you will end up with something that sounds like a million other love poems!.
Start by writing down a few of the most important things that you want to say!. Then shorten these lines, dropping unnecessary words!. And then move these lines around looking for the poetry in them!. Only when you have found all the poetry already there do you need to think about adding anything!. This way the poem will be truly yours!.

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Think of every word you know to do with love!. Write them all down!. Next think of every thing you love about your lady!. Write that all down!. Pick out of of the ones that rhyme and put them all together in a meaningful and emotional way!. This poem I wrote for my girl should help you:

Sunset Love
By Richard Vanston


Lying next to me you are
Your fair skin touching mine
Laying here together
After our naughty ‘play-time’

Hand in hand we lay together
We feel each others heat
Breathing deeply both of us
You know I’d never cheat

My heart is racing so is yours
Our arms around each other
I comfort you as you do for me
I never want another lover

Our love is strong like concrete
We cherish each others dream
We’d sit and talk for hours
Under the sunset by the stream

This Sunset Love will never die
It is perfect just like you
We love each other everyday
Our love is purely true


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threesome of love poems are here 4 u






LIBRA HAPPY BIRTHDAY
Libran's are from a world of a kind,
Of those who have a beautiful mind!.
They are very methodical and enchanting,
Their smile is very, very charming!.
Libras is a world to earn name and fame,
Their glances win hearts all the same,
Of those who reward them with a Rose,
My dear Libras are, to whom the universe,
The lovers' the classic winners,
Would all love to propose!.
My Dear!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
From!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
With a bunch of roses to you!.



Some Summers Past

Some summers past, we were standing,
For each others’ better halves waiting,
It was then our eyes did glance,
And their arrival we forgot perchance!.

It was then your eyes met mine again,
Yes it was some summers past,
We smiled and blushed
At each others arms we thrust!.
It was as if a moment God sent,
It was our summer at the end!.

That day we still remember till today,
When we met that summers' day,
Ever since we have been two souls
Yet only in one, since that summer,
Yes it was the summer of our lives,
A long remembered association,
At last we built upon a union!.

Still today you know, we remember that day,
When we met for a long life’s stay,
Yes my sweetheart it was the summer


It was the best of life’s summers,
If we both can say
It was over a few decades ago,
But for us it is still as if
It was just yesterday!.
Yes many summers have passed away!.
!.

KISS ME MISS
Miss, Miss, do give me a kiss,
Kiss, kiss, I do not want to miss
Sis, where is your sis, I’ll give her a kiss

Then they say how one kisses, any way
What is French and what is American
What kiss is Japanese and what really is Chinese,
It’s all in ones imagination,

Those who are racial
Or have feelings of being commercial
Do not know how far a kiss can go
Even there down below!.

Yes Miss can help, miss a train for you!.
Just kiss and kiss and kiss
do not let any go amiss!.
And you will see
That all kisses are for free

Yes before foreplay and after,
Even after any earthly disaster,
It’s a kiss that one hankers for
Since time's gone by for centuries for sure!.
Now go ahead and kiss your dear,
Yes my friend without any fear,
Oh this secret message of kiss,
do not unfurl to your kissing miss!.

AM I A POET!?!?!? KISS me; Miss




SMILE
Mostly I smile all the while
I smile all my way, in my inimical style,
And when I smile all my friends say
Are you happy, why are you so gay,

Then comes along this girl I knew
Phew, how lovely really unlike, so few!.
I looked at her and smiled her way
She smiled at my smile right- away,
And then took my smile away!.

I went unto her, for her hand to ask
Do you know what she had to give!?
No, no, no, just do not ask!.

She smiled back and gave a flying kiss,
Which honestly I tried to catch and was sure not miss!.
Then as for a while I looked away,
She was gone far, far distance away

She took my smile away from me
And that’s when I lost my smile you see,
Do you now realise, how I lost my smile,
I myself was wondering all this while!.

It was in the wilderness so far, heaven knows where,
And when she had gone and my smile wasn’t there,
I was all the time wondering, was that one you!.
Return my smile you stole away,
Yes darling I love you in all life’s way

WHAT IS LOVE
Love is the nectar we all want,
And hold it in our hands like a cup,
How we wish it not to let it go,
As love is the only possession one does show!. !.

And hopes to nurse it for all times
Yet we hanker for more and do not share
What is love is love divine!.
We always think of those times we wanted,
But our love was always daunted,
Hoping that some one will come our way
And upon us his whole beings love spray!.


We still hope some day love will come our way
And lead us from the threshold of sadness
To a zone of timeless happiness;
And it will then only we will know
How love does blossom and glow!.
back to me!.

WHERE IS MY LOVE
Last time we met it was perhaps our last!.
Then it was up in our minds to forget the past!.
My instinct tells me you are now in another’s arms!.
But I know it is for just a while no more,
For when your lips turn dry you know
You will thirst for more, yes I mean more!.
Only then you will know that you want

WHERE IS MY LOVE

All around me I find deathly silence,
It at times is so killing and does me silence!.
Then suddenly I look around and become mad,
Where my dear where have you, it makes me sad!.

Often I ask where I should go in search,
As my loved one has left me in the lurch,
I suddenly wonder if I shalWww@QuestionHome@Com

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