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Question: Is this poem any good!? Be honest, I don't care!?
Lips twitch upwards,
Parting to reveal pearl white teeth!.
A twinkle appears in her eyes,
An ecstatic laugh follows!.
Everyone joins in, they become one!.
Her laughter stops,
The room is still again!.

also, any idea for a name!?Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
That was awesome! I love the part where you say "Everyone joins in, they become one" Amazing line!!! You have a lot of potential, if you practice more you'll be able to perfect it! A good name would be!.!.!.!."Laughter" Www@QuestionHome@Com

pretty good to me!.

contageous control!? ha i don't know!. i usually name my poems something completely nonsensical or a repeated idea or verseWww@QuestionHome@Com

i think its wonderful =)
i would name it controller because she controls the rooms atmosphere
but thats just me!.!.
keep up with your poems they are great =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Potential!.
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ok!. for me it sounds ok!. it's not bad!.!.!.!.
but if you were righting this poem with the right feelings inside!. it's the best poem then!
lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

THE POPULAR GIRL CONTROLS ALL!! :) i like it! write more!Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's okay, but don't quit your day job just yetWww@QuestionHome@Com