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Question: When people ask, do you disclose your preference!?
Our empathy is endless
borrowed and defenseless
feathers in the fog flapping
bloodied fingers feeble tapping!.

We seduce a sudden smile
comfort and crass across the mile
marching the sheep into the fire
the undisputed champion liar!.

Our wayward judgements
are moral entrenchments
sewing ditches
with the promise of praise
from the mountain jury
in moon’s mad haze!.
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As the jury (voters) reaches the verdict who is going to be the president, all promises 'd be forgotten, and by
"bloodied fingers feeble tapping
marching the sheep into the fire
the undisputed champion liar!."

and all done according to
"Our wayward judgements
are moral entrenchments
sewing ditches
with the promise of praise"
from the very jury, living in the same state of chaos!.

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Hm Marching the Sheep into the Fire!?

Well in the Bible sheep are lambs of God or (gentiles) followers
so are you saying that Many persuade others to follow them!?

And into the Fire well MAYBE you never meant to be a religious
word But what I can say is that it seems clear to me from re reading this That People Persuade the Lambs to leave the flock so to speak
and join the non followers in the sin they create
"the undisputed champion liar" well i would say that about sums it up
for me as it states in the bible that there will be many false prophets who "seduce" the heart of man to follow blindly in sin without them truly realizing it


OKAY so that was just my OWN opinion of the poem

But it was really good!
I liked the lines last lines
"Our wayward judgments
are moral entrenchments
sewing ditches
with the promise of praise
from the mountain jury
in moon’s mad haze!."

We judge others far too quickly these days
And Promises are always broken

Not sure about that last line though!?
in Moons mad haze!? hm i guess It means our self inflicting ways!?
i dunno lol
well thanks again!
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Its quite good : -

Promises promises promises amore
For little souls in silence implore
A little kindness, a moment of your time
What matters to you, for one instant

A little peace, a drop of love, a grace
From he who efface with audacious blaze
On our behalf nations to ruin
Remains aloof for one so bold so estranged

A smile maybe, a gentleness in your tone
To build my home in your little world
Of dreams and vows made impromptu
Awaited in anticipation for your coming!.

Not you nor I, a little dwelling, a love
A child and happiness flowing
In peaceful climes neighbours friendly
No great boons surely, for one so powered!.

To trust and have faith, comes liberty
A freedom from the pangs of fear
Or need, or trepidation, a request too much
A little moment of your time!.

!.!.!.

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I had to wait around for some other answers to help give me a clue on this one, DMag!.!.!.!.loved some of the phrasing, but like angrypete, must confess!.!.!.!.I missed it, until you told him he's on it!.!.!.so!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
the meaningless of it all at times!?!?!?

I'll have to ask pa!.!.!.!.!.!

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I Learnt along time ago Sir,
That no amount of emotions shown,
No hapless loss, in longing, is sown!.
Only that, I wish this way,
Defied and left, will come, what may!.

My Heart once opened,
Closed once more!.
I Live for the Day!.
Expect nothing, so nothing is
Denied me,in my struggle!.!.!.
For Self!.

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the empathy is endless is too good, because it makes sense to me that we identify with others in parts and bits in some way or it would be impossible to associate with others who are in a huge numbersWww@QuestionHome@Com

I read this a couple of times to really try and grasp the meaning!. From the first two lines I thought you were referring to our nation and the state its in!. I fear I have missed the real meaningWww@QuestionHome@Com

This is powerful!. I can't help but think you're speaking of the U!.S!. imposing it's views on the world, all the while sending our men and women into the fire!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Lots of imagery, real and virtual, in this one!. We all need strokes, but at what price!?

EDIT: Seems I missed the core of this one completely!. Oh well, can't win them all!Www@QuestionHome@Com

u may like to understand precisely as to what u want to say some lines stiches and ditches i am unable to comprehend sorryWww@QuestionHome@Com

Cool stuff,I love it,whatever it means,I love it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

the promise of praise is the one line i felt the most that stood out to me!. we all need thatWww@QuestionHome@Com