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Question: What do you think of my short poem so far!?
Starting fresh
The memories stay
Affecting my life
In every possible way

You changed my life
The way I feel
My thoughts of this
I need not conceal

I found the cure
For all my pain
Talking to someone
Relief soon came


i'm writing it to my councillor to thank him for listening to and helping me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i think he'd appreciate it!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Not being nasty but your meter is offWww@QuestionHome@Com