Does this make sense? please help ??

Question: Does this make sense!? please help ?!?

I am trying to write a poem to describe how i feel like a different person now that i told the councillor, about how a guy had tried to touch me!.!.!.!.

I am not very good at writing about this sort of thing and have come up with not very much!.

Can you give me some advice on how to make it better!?

Starting fresh
The memories stay
Affecting my life
In every possible way

You changed my life
The way I feel
My thoughts of this
I need not conceal

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Title = The memories stay with me!.
The memories stay with me
affecting my life always
In every possible way
I feel you changed my life forever
My thaughts of this I can not conceal
Hope one day I will have the strength to start over,but for now
The memories stay with me

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You are doing a good job!.
even though you have made a fresh start the memory will live with you
and has changed your way of thinking, You are not afraid!

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