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Question: I want to write a poem to thank someone for helping me!.!.!.!.!.!. Please help me, it means alot to me! - thankyou e!?
i am trying to write a poem to describe how i feel like a different person now that i told the councillor at my school about how a guy had tried to touch me!.!.!.!. i am not very good at writing about this and have come up with not very much!. Can you give me some examples of what the next lines could be!?
This is what i have come up with so far!.!.!. can you change it to sound better!?
Starting fresh
The memories stay
Affecting my life
In every possible way
And any idea's or lines that i can use next!?
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I think you will find it easier if you don't use rhyme!. It isn't necessary, and searching for a rhyme often means compromising on the wrong word!.
Take a look, not for religious reasons, at the psalms in the Bible!. This ancient poetry achieved its effect, not with rhymes or meter, but by saying the same thing twice, using different words!. The repetition tells the reader it is poetry, but you are no longer constrained by the mechanics!.
If you must go on…
Whatever
Other people say,
I'll journey on,
Come what may!.
Tomorrow
Is another day!.
Hang in there!
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Your doing great! but you don't have to rhyme if you don't want to!.
Because of you, I start a new! the memories may be fresh but soon to part my mine and I can start a new memory all becaue of you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com