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Question: Let's just pretend that I never heard of the MLA until 2 years ago!. Have I progressed with my punctuation!?
Her Timbre
by TD Euwaite
Deep, rich tones of her case wrapped in leather,
and the olden luster
of a well made latch and hinges!.
With a snap, unclasped
in smooth and silent motion,
Deep, red velvet lined creases and channels
caress your body in pieces,
the grain of red Cocobolo,
tone holes, beautiful ivory,
silver keys, matchless in luster,
Deep, I moisten the reed to the ligature,
awaken each pad and lever,
Bach and the Maestro wait for us!.
From below, you and I ,
we go down low
to the E,
and hold…
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Oh Hmmmm! you have a lot of wonderful punctuation!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
Very sensuous!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
An instrument made from the beautiful polished cocobolo tree is to be highly prized indeed!. The fact it has a reed suggests this is either a clarinet or oboe, rather than the fine basses that often sport this prized wood in inlays!. I can only hope the music is as beautiful!.
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I love the elaborate and sensual imagery in this poem!. I am a big fan of punctuation, and this you have used perfectly!. This is a delight to my mind and senses!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
No typo: 'you and I' is correct in this instance (subjects of the verb)!. Your punctuation and your musical notes are perfect, as is the description of the instrument!.
Do you want rhyme or proper English!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
I love clarinets, I played when I was younger, that and the oboe!.
Wondrous instruments, the woodwinds!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
And what instrument are we really playing!? lol Even ironwood would be impressed! Well said, enjoyable read!.Www@QuestionHome@Com