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Question: Ok this is a poem well sorta rate it!?
well heres one i need a title-help with a title too!?-
I'm most Defiantly UN perfect
i don't know about you but i love it!.
My hair doesn't ever stay in place
i spill a lot of things!.
I'm really clumsy and
sometimes I have a broken heart!.
My friends and I sometimes fight
i can be very uptight,
and a lot of days nothing goes right!.
but when I think about!.!.
it and take a step back,
i remember how amazing life truly is
and that maybe,
just maybe,
i like being un-perfect!. ok what should i title it, and rate it 1-10 also i really need help! (by the way im a 12 year old girl)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
k a, i saw it online already!. sorry, but i think you may have been "inspired!."
b, it's imperfect!.!.!.
c, honestly !? like a 3!. it's not original!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
very nice for a twelve year old and i think you should title it Amazing Life honestly!. i give it a good 7!. :-) I am 13 and i couldn't have done anything better!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
6 im 12 too :PWww@QuestionHome@Com
Its a 8 OUT OF 10!! Good JOB!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
that is very good I would rate it a 8 (I am 12 too)Www@QuestionHome@Com
ok well the poems ok but u didnt write it bcuz i've cn this online b4 haha but nice try lol
~?Jojo?~Www@QuestionHome@Com