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I lost my father, I lost my friend
I loved you to the bitter end
I did not know you, I did not care
I would have met you, anywhere
I never knew him, he did not know
That in my heart, my love did grow
He did not know, that time would tell
That when he left, he left a spell
Some people ask me, who’s my dad
I have his looks, that makes me glad
Now his soul is far away
I love him each, and every day
For those who feel, the same as me
When we were young, we cried our plea
We want our parents, joined again
We know not now, just tell us when
Sometimes at night, I would cry
All thru my life, I wondered why
For my mom, I love you so
Because you never, let me go
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Something tells me
your father died
and this is very tragic
You had a strong bond
with him!. Therefore, he is
your best friend!.
Your love for him did not
change how you felt
even though you never knew him!.
Most sons would resemble their father
You will remember your father
You may not have known your father
because he was away a lot
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That is very good!. There is a nice rhyme in it and it is just the right length for a poem!. Keep writing it a great way to get feelings on paper!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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It is Truly an amazing poem!. Very good descriptive words, its very short and to the point but yet its very "story like"!.
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That was a very nice poem!. You and your dad are linked by hearts and hereditary stuff!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very good poem!. I am sure many can relateWww@QuestionHome@Com
good poem, heartfelt!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com