Just let me my fans?

Question: Just let me my fans!?

JUST LET ME

Let me come to you with open arms ,

And then when I come, surround me,

And as my lips meet yours ,

Let them smack

And put thunder to sham!.,

When the lightening passes through my spine ,

Let it make my body quiver ,

And let it my soul fly and emerge in thee!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Just let me tell you,
that was about average!.!.!.!.!.
not saying it was complete rubish!.!.!.!. but with such simple words and such long lines, nothing can be really said!. Short and meaningful!.!.!.!.!.
Listen to poets and you will understand!.!.!.!.!.
by listen i mean music!.!.!.!. the lyrics of some songs are like poems!.!.!. like bob dylan, bobby darin, elton john and billy joel!.!.!. old but well writen meaningful songs!.!.!.!.!.
short and sweet!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sorry, but this stinks!. Spelling and grammatical errors sink it before it sails!. And please, do you really want your reader to hear lips smacking!? Put lightning to sham!? Come on, a little more effort!.Www@QuestionHome@Com