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Question: My poem!.!.!.what do you think!?
These nights haunt me, the stillness, and the
silence!.
On nights like this I remember her!.
I held her on nights like this!.
I held her before a silent kiss!.

I wanted to love her, maybe I loved
her!.
Those eyes twinkle, a silence lighthouse!.
They relieve and guide!. Maybe I loved
her!.

How could someone not love her!.
I wanted her to love me, maybe she loved
me!.
On silent nights like this I am reminded!.
The stars twinkle and shine!.

Maye If I held on!. But how to hold on to
something so precious!.
So strong, still so delicate!.
Maybe if I loved her then!.
Now I could be forgetting!.

Still like cool air,
I needed in these lungs!.
These moments couldn't keep forever!.
She was there, but I never had her!.
And having to release her!.

The stars beacon and twinkle!.
On silent nights like this I am reminded!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Wow, you have a real talent, I never realised!.
Sounds like missed opportunity and regret!.!. (like I mentioned!)!. It's very bittersweet, and melancholy!. And I sense feelings of confusion intertwined in the poem!. Is it mainly about one realising just how much they love(d) someone, once that person is gone from their life!?
It's beautiful!.
I particularly like the fifth verse!.
You're a talented poet, I hope you keep these safe somewhere!. Www@QuestionHome@Com