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Question: Opinion please!.!.!.first anacrostic!?
Even though I have written poetry and even had a couple published in journals, I have never fooled with anacrostic!. This may be too long to be called one!. Please let me know your opinions!.

Horror and hurt
Unnecessary
Manipulation and shame
Injury for damage
Leaving me drained
Impalement inescapable
Attacked by prestige and pulled strings
This body weakens
Intervening with my character
Of all my values and morals
Nothing shows now but tears!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I saw this below,but personally didn't realise most therapy is effectively given using this as almost a technique so the pt, makes breakthroughs not at the time one speaks but,it is a powerful way to implant positivity and challenge the bad thoughts a lot of people have!.also if a pt is having remission,they will recall this style,which can be used as a way to vent ones hurt without saying IM hurt

reading your writing i see statement,question,and why!?then i see sadness because of being made to perhaps do things that are hurtful!.perhaps metaphor for abuse!.and a physical state confirmation
there is some form of social class comment (to me) in the' prestige' and pulled strings

The body weakens by ABUSIVE +MANIPULATING+ TERRORISING PEOPLE who get a kick out of making others feel hurt!.

it's disturbing,yet/and sad and it resolves like a perfect cadence,oh dear i'm a poet now!

yeah its good,I think know the person,whoever it is-also i saw this this,if one meditates on the word flow,it can be soporific

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i think you did a good job better than i could do!.!.!.!.
would you look at mine!.
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The words this and of need to be changed, but other than that it is good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ok I am not sure what exactly anachrostic is but its good!. Www@QuestionHome@Com