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Question: "Angels in Darkness" !.!.!.Poem i wrote!.!?
please tell me what you think!.!.and if there is anything i should change!!

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The brilliant sunshine fades to black
In this darkness I’m standing alone in the grace of the night
The smell of death lurks around me!.
I walk towards the shinning angel in the distance
Its calling to me,
I start running towards the shimmering image!.
Everything goes dark!.
I freeze in my tracks,
I glance all around me!.
I see nothing,
Nothing but blackness beckoning to me!.
I start to hear voices within the mist,
The angel appears once more,
It’s trying to speak to me,
But I can’t understand,
What do I do!?
How can I get away from this everlasting darkness!?
I’m falling off the edge of this life!.
I can’t seem to stand up again!.
Lost within this darkness
I long to hear the voices the angels call their own!.
I long to be free of myself,
Free for this pain!.
This never ending life, filled with mixed emotions of pain and confusion!.
My world of endless hopes and lies, kill what love I hold so dear!.
“Where are your angels now!?”
You ask me…
“My angels are right beside me, protecting me from this world of hate!.”
The deep cold darkness fades to gray,
and all that remains to be said,
…will never be heard!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
truly beautiful I love it !. your gifted !.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful!.!.!.!.absolutely Beautiful :0Www@QuestionHome@Com

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holy crap that is one kick a** poem, nope its good the way it is =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

that was one of the best poem I have ever heard :)Www@QuestionHome@Com