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Question: Poem!.!.sad stuff !?
You have these coastline eyes, which tells no lies,
And I have these lungs that are filled with searching eyes!.
I smoke my last cigarette as I cough up the sun
That has caused me to not sing so well!.

SO the beach you say forgives you, for what you've done,
But you see the kid standing there, he is your son!.
You don't want anything to do with him or me,
Well that is quite plain to see!.

You said you'll have an abortion, to let this go,
Well there is something I think you should know!.
Just because the oceans made of water,
Doesn't mean you can drink it!.

Abandonment is something, that a heart should never feel,
But I guess when you do, you relies your real
And do you look into your babies eyes,
And do you see your own ******** lies!.

I tried to drink the poison, with one great swallow,
I was hoping if I did, then you would follow!.
But the setting keeps my eyes awake,
So I have no time to pass away!.

And I'll drive so far away now so you never see my eyes,
Casue I am the one, who can't deal with your lies!.
So do you remember when you had your son!.!.!.
Was it to hard to be a mother!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Yea your right sad stuff as in it is a sad story!. It makes me think deep way inside myself!. It gives me that feeling of despair and being all alone in this world!.

I think it's great another poem to chalk up on the Hit Parade!.
I may have to stop answering your questions, people may think I'm stocking you!. But your poetry is so good I can't help but say what I feel
So keep up the good work!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

that's really good!. when i see poems like that it makes me want to write my own!.Www@QuestionHome@Com