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Question: PLEASE READ MY POEM! The Dark Side of the Moon !?
I just wrote this after staring at the moon probably a little too long!.!.!.

The Dark Side of the Moon


The dark side of the moon is calling me
whispering things in my ear!.
telling me of old melancholy,
of dispute, disease and fear!.
Now i know why the wolfs cry to the moon,
this invasion of your head!.
Old and mysterious,
a book yet to be fully read!.
so now even i cry to to the moon,
every night!.
Trying to get free this pestilence,
away from this fright!.
People think i'm crazy,
maybe i am!.
locked up in an asylum,
but innocent as a lamb!.
Can't you see!?
In times like this logic is of no use,
only a poor,
folly ridden excuse!.
So i'll rot in a straight jacket,
my knowledge of no use,
while you'll sleep well at night,
peaceful with excuse!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I would suggest taking that to poetry!.com!. It is a great poem and I really mean it!. I have put some poetry there and it is so that everyone who goes there can always read it!. It never goes away!. It has great depth!. Way to go!. You could go far in writing if you keep this up!. God Bless!Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow that is amazing, try competitions!!! im sure you will go far :)Www@QuestionHome@Com