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Question: So i wrote a poem on the spot!.!.!.!.!? what do you think!?
all the insecurities
spring forth to my face
i drip of insanity
a drop of indignity
the redness to my heat
the fire under my skin
i ache to make the sound
make sense
and i breath just enough to
finish
i cant stand the eyes
ignoring all the world
focusing on every detail
i die a little inside
with a smile on my face





-all the worlds a stage-
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my interpretation of this
you were face with so many questions and had doubts
that it drove you temporarily insane
you've did something that you normally would not have done which may have brought you shame or to your family/friends
it perhaps was a physical element and upon completion you realize and it killed a part of you to do that but it was worth it at the moment!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

you wrote this on the spot!? very interesting poem!. seems to me, that the poem is about pain and suffering, yet the person still manages to keep a bright look for people to see!. sit down, and think up of a poem and write it!. then post it up here!. :D i'm sure it'll be excellent, just look at this one you wrote!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Aww YOU JUST WROTE IT!?
that is so beautiful!
and so are you!
for beauty comes from within
and you have shown this by what you have written!
i think maybe you can do it more justice just go over it and see the mistakes made
i do that sometimes too I type too fast and never realize what i wrote could be misinterpreted!

Thanks for making my Day ;)
btw Since i cannot email you how old are ya!?
just curious to know
take care
and as always God blessWww@QuestionHome@Com

It's a poem!. I'm not gonna dog you, but it is a poem and fits the qualifications for it!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

I suppose it's alright - but I must admit, I cannot make sense of it!.
Some explanation needed perhaps!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Not bad - but there's an apostrophe in world's!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!.!.It speaks for itself!. You are on the right track!.
Nice read!Www@QuestionHome@Com

sounds pretty good for on the spot/////Www@QuestionHome@Com