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Question: A poem i redid with some revision i guess!.!.!. rate!?
I know of this girl,
I think I love,
She's out of this world
Into the stars and above!.

She told me once,
I Just wasn't right,
I was too fun,
To be like other guys!.

She tipped back my head,
And closed her eyes,
And what she whispered,
Took me by surprise!.

My hand took hers,
And together we laid,
Left all our fears,
In the world outside the shade!.

And then somehow my lips found hers
And somehow i was thrown of track
And somehow without a word
Somehow, somehow, she kissed me back!.

so what do you think now!?Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
AWWW THAT'S SWEET
YOU ARE GREAT IN POETRY
(DON'T MIND THAT IMWRITING IN CAPS)Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is cliche and very repetitive and leaves everything to ones imagination!. Poor effort!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Like other one!.!.!.
I liked it!
It was very well written!.
Sweet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com