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Questions!?
By: Kentrell Washington

So tell me why I cry
This silent cry
No tears run down my eyes
My soul is twisted
My mind is turned
My heart upside down
And my emotions unloaded
So can you quote it!?
Or tell me when my heart stops
And when my body drops
Will I be known for doing good!?
Or just another death in the hood
A young black male
Subdued by crack cells
Emerged from packed jails
Eternally in hell
Death meets me “Kentrell”
We ain’t made to survive
But surprisingly I am alive
Will my death come quick I wonder
Or will it be slow
Will I make it to heaven!?
Or have an eternally damned soul
Will I reach my goals!?
Or be a failure
No one to somebody
Or someone to everybody
Will I be under God’s watchful eye!?
When it comes to when I die
I know I ask a lot
I ask to give this off my chest
And you can’t answer these questions
But time will tell
So tell then truthfully it’s like we living in hell
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
You have a very deep soul and an awesome ability to write meaningful heartfelt poetry that speaks to all who read it! ( even the jerk )
Don't be discouraged by negative feedback, just keep pouring yourself out there and giving us all something to think about with your well written words!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

damn man that was the worst gayest thing everWww@QuestionHome@Com

a good one i sayWww@QuestionHome@Com