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Question: So what do you think do you like or not!?
do u like or dislike opinions welcomed
i like holding her hand
holding her in my arms
never wanting to let go
never wanting to say good bye
wishing the kiss lasted forever
and with every hug an kiss
our relationship grows stronger
i feel sad when ever she cries
wanting to make things better
but all i can do is tell her
that i always be there
and all she needs to know
is i'll always love her
an no its not for a gf i don't have one its not about a girl i like its just something i came up with!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Its pretty good:)
I really like your peoms they remind me of mine!.
So how are you today!?
Im okay i guess!.
Have fun, keep pn writing boyy, bailes!.
Ps!.I checkedd out yer space:)Www@QuestionHome@Com
That is way better than the other poem I read by you!. Your grammar and spellings have improved a lot!. It has a nice rhyme!. Try and broaden your vocab in future poems!. I take it you are young so you have years to develop your poems!. Practice make perfect!. well doneWww@QuestionHome@Com
I like it a lot!! I like this one the best out of all your other poems!!Www@QuestionHome@Com